專項高分突破：名師幫你修改考研英語作文(3)

第四篇（showo）

Directions

You want to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards what qualifications one needs for acceptance, fees and possible scholarships, and accommodation.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. Do not write the address.

Distinguished(Honorable) Sir:

　　My name is Li Ming. I am a college student in China. This year is my senior year (I am a senior) and I decide to pursue a post-graduate education(study) abroad. I got the information of your esteemed university from website, from which I carefully studied the(\) your splendid history and your strength in various subjects(achievements in various fields). All of that appeals to me (It appeals to me) a lot, so,(\) I am writing this letter in the hope of knowing your esteemed school better.

　　Basically, I have three inquiries(questions). The first goes to(is) the qualifications needed for acceptance. I learnt from your homepage that your esteemed university admits the most qualified students worldwide only. So, (\) could you share me some concrete qualification in this respect? My second question is for(about) the tuition and scholarship. I would like to know the yearly tuition and the scholarship(available), and the rules and regulations in this areas. Beyond(Besides) the above two aspects, I am quite interested in the accommodation situation(\) there. Do you provide the domitory (dormitory) for the students from foreign countries? And how(what) about the charges of the accommodations(accommodation)? What is more, I will be highly grateful to you if you can provide me more detail informaiton (information) of the domitory (dormitory) there.

　　I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible!

Best regards!

Yours most sincerely

Li Ming

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