>>>>考試吧策劃：2015年考研報(bào)名時(shí)間及指南專題

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　8-10分

第一篇

　　Dear Tommy,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

　　If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed my law exam held for once a year.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Jane Yang

　　考研英語作文批改點(diǎn)評(píng)如下：

　　Dear Tommy,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for you timely returning admission ticket to me.

　　If it had not been for your assistance in warmheartedly picking up my admission ticket and getting it back to me, I fear that I would have been missed(改為missing) my law exam held for once a year.

　　Every one agrees that it was you who came to help me and saved me from the trouble. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Jane Yang

　　8分

　　同學(xué)你好，作文寫的很不錯(cuò)，但是要注意虛擬語氣的用法，建議再復(fù)習(xí)一下。

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